Final Reflective Letter!!

Dear, Marlen

I truly enjoyed the two whole semester that I had you. You truly were the only professor here that I enjoyed and made stressed out at the same time and liked it lol. I can honestly say that I enjoyed this journey back from 101 lol but Im glad Im done. The class this semester was completely different from 101 of course. But I will admit I thought it was going to be hard but not as hard as I thought. I know you informed me in the beginning that I was going to be working hard this semester. I guess it didn’t really hit how serious you were until I had to start my research paper. You know I was all over the place and panicky about the 5 week in. Because the topic I chose I thought I would enjoy it because it was dealing with dreams and my major. But there was no structure or main focus and that’s what made it so hard. Until you told me to calm down and that i wasn’t the only person going through this. That’s what I did but it was easier said then done because I wanted to he ahead of the game. But I couldn’t because I didn’t know what I was doing half the time. After taking one step at a time and finishing everything things started to come together. This is when I started to breath and enjoy the paper I was writing. The parts I enjoyed the most was the result& discussion section and peer advising section. This is were I actually put the paper to the test and really see what people thought about the questions I asked and what results I wanted. Everything went well and it was helpful. Just to have multiple peer advisors to look at my paper to make my paper come more to life. I wasn’t so fond of publishing my paper just because I don’t like my work in general and Im my worst critic. You explained to me the purpose of the submission and it made me have a whole different outlook on it and it made sense. I had fun with you overall Marlen I hope for the best for you in Japan and other opportunties. Thank you for the wonderful adventure!

Love, Tempess Johns

Handout

Dreams: The Psychological Mind of Interior Designers
In the Unconscious state of mind
Tempess Johns
Indiana University of Pennsylvania
Email: sbxp@iup.edu
Date:TTT

Abstract:
With there being so many different definitions of the word dream, and it being so vague. I wanted to focus it on one thing, which would be my major in Interior design. Through this 15 week research process, I’ve looked for what happens in the creative mind of an interior designer. In the Unconscious State of Mind, as well as if it has affected their work throughout their major and or career. Within my paper I mentioned myself being a participant of remembering my dreams and incorporating them in my designs. By the end of my research I resulted to find that dreams meant goals, inspiration, and an influence to my interviewees. This made the paper turn in a different direction but it became interesting to see a different perspective of the word “Dream.”

What does a Dream mean to you?

Dream: A series of images, ideas, emotions and sensations occurring involuntary in the mind during certain stages of sleep.
- A wild fancy or hope
- A day dream, trance
- A condition or achievement that is longed for; an aspiration

All of these come to mind when a person may think of the word dream. Now look at the two images below. Which one would you most likely want to own?

Questions:

1. When you hear the word dream what do you think of?

2. Describe your dream house?

3. How has time changed in the interior design field since you where younger?

Methodology:
- Research questions were written down to form questions for my participates. Most of which I didn’t know personally and others I did. So my interview with my interviewees didn’t affect my research in anyway.
- 5 people were interviewed face to face with me as I asked them questioned that helped cover my research paper. Two were my professors while the others were close friends of mine. They all contributed and answered the questions very well.

Findings:
I found out that more of my interviewees disagreed with the questions I asked about them reticulating what a dream meant. Also if they could usually remember their dreams, then use them in their life.

Selected References:

Schaverien,Joy. (2005). Art, dreams and active imagination: A post – Junigan approach to transference and the image. (Vol.50 Issue 2, p127-153, 27p). April 2005.

Potthoff, Joy, K.(2006). Interior Designer in Archtectural Education. International Journal of Art and Design. May 2006. Vol.25 Issues 2. p217-230, 14p, 2charts, 2graphs.

Freud, Sigmund. (1998). Interpretations of Dreams. Dec 23, 1998. http://www.wsu.edu:8080/~wldciv/world_civ_reader/world_civ_reader_2/fr

Wallack, Catherine. 2009. Dream Home: Remodeling american expectations with model houses. The journal of American Culture. Dec 2009. Vol 32,Iss

Final Draft

Dreams: The Psychological intelligence of Interior Designers
In the Unconscious state of mind

Tempess Johns
Section 202
Marlen Harrison
May 7, 2010

Abstract:

With there being so many different definitions of the word dream, and it being so vague. I wanted to focus it on one thing, which would be my major in Interior design. Through this 15 week research process, I’ve looked for what happens in the creative mind of an interior designer. In the Unconscious State of Mind, as well as if it has affected their work throughout their major and or career. Within my paper I mentioned myself being a participant of remembering my dreams and incorporating them in my designs. By the end of my research I resulted to find that dreams meant goals, inspiration, and an influence to my interviewees. This made the paper turn in a different direction but it became interesting to see a different perspective of the word “Dream.”

Dreams: I think of Déjà vu, a fantasy world, an unreal imagination, Martin Luther King Jr, and many others. All of these things come to mind when I think of dreams. In what ways have Dreams, Inspiration, and Goals influenced designers in the 20th and the 21st centuries? A famous philosopher had once said “that our minds preserve memories and emotions which are not always consciously available to us have transformed the way humanity views itself ever since” (Sigmund, 1856). Over the years, dreams have been interpreted from different perspectives like a goal, imagination, figure of speech, or a design. Dreams have affected many people as well as influenced them to express themselves in a different way, for example, with writing or even through art. One man decided to do this named Martin Luther King Jr. He decided to make a difference by writing a speech called “I Have a Dream” based on life goals for the future that he thought would end the discrimination between all races. Later on this speech influenced many people from all over the world by changing the movement of segregation throughout all races which would change their lives forever.
Dreams are an amazing thing to have. Dreams are repressed emotions and thoughts within the mind when a person is asleep. In many ways, this is where many designers are inspired to create a dream design and a dream home like what the home buyers looks forward to. In the Dream Home: Remodeling American expectations with model houses journal it explained how WWII, there were so many people that wanted a dream house or dream living. Since the war was going on, a lot of things ended up changing during this time period. When the men would come home, they had to share homes with other families just because there were no rooms available because of the large population. Finally, when the war was beginning to end, so did the housing situation; millions of homes were being built. There were a decent amount of families interested in the model homes advertised within newspapers and magazines. This started the look for homes to have more space and even have backyards, which was a new design that not a lot of people were used to during this time period. Dreams continue to be an inspiration as well as a goal for many people until this day. One will notice that designs, colors, and structures have changed over time and they’re not the same. Dreams will always and forever be a creative imagination that people will choose not to pursue within their daily lives. Whether it’s in their career or not, it will always be there which leads us into why we have dreams in the beginning.
In the article “Dreams: Bringing us two steps closer to the client’s needs,” The Andrea Koch talks about another author named Roger and his propositions on the “Theory Personality on Behavior.” He goes into detail about what dreams are and what they mean to everyday people. He has said that “Such a person is more potentially aware, not only of the stimuli from outside, but of ideas and dreams, and of the ongoing flow of feelings, emotions, and physiological reactions has that he or she sensed from within” (Rogers, 1980, p.3). After he had tested his research on dreams by recording himself while sleeping, many other authors have begun doing more research on dreams and testing things out by the person- centered community. Another major factor within dreaming is REM which means rapid eye movement. This happens when a person is asleep, and describes the rate of the eye moving while the person is asleep during the REM phasic period. This increases the possibility of remembering a dream then you would if he/she experience the REM tonic period and that is when a person is not experiencing REM. There have been two hypothesizes: “scanning hypothesis” and the “sensory image- free association a hypothesis”. Both explain what happens while dreaming. If a person is experiencing a scanning hypothesis it is suggested that the REM is reflecting the dreamer’s voluntary watching of visual imagery in a dream. Sensory image hypothesis says that REM happens spontaneously with any type of voluntary control and generates a dream image. The reason why the eye moves is because a person is scanning the visual dream images of his/her dream. In many ways, this has happened and even inspired many designers over the years of what they dreamed about and made it into reality. A dream can be considered a succession of images, thoughts, or emotions passing through the mind during sleep, or even goals, influences, and inspiration throughout life that one could imagine or make come true. There are so many different meanings of a dream to so many people over the years. In the 60’s the word dream was used in a famous speech called “I have a Dream” by an African American man that wanted to see a difference and make a difference not only in his community but around the world. He was brought up as an ordinary black male in the state of Georgia, attending segregated schools, and lived everyday questioning and wondering why everyone was so discriminative or racist and when this was going to stop. Years later, he found his calling by going around the world giving speeches to people to make a difference and to love one another. By having protest, and marches, Martin Luther King Jr. began to make a difference and started having people from every race come to listen to him. Even though he did not live to see the day that his dream came true, He would have been proud to see that years from now his “I have a Dream” speech will always be cherished and never forgotten. The word Dream in the interior design and architecture world has been a fantasy ever since the WWII. For centuries people go on about their dream homes and then explain exactly what they would love in or on it. However, most dream homes never come true because of finances and more. In the article by Catherine Wallack, she talks about model homes during the post war and how important and popular they were because of the war destroying so much. There were times when the men came home from the war and had to live in complicated living conditions with their family. This was when there was a high need of housing and the model homes were the newest structures out with wonderful designs. While this was happening people began buying these dream homes that came with new technologies, which started to reinforce genders within the households. Today, it has progressed so that clients and the famous have made their dreams come true more than they did during the postwar time. Gender roles have changed and houses have become bigger.
In my methodology section, I’m going to explain in an auto ethnography genre how dreams inspired or been a goal in my interior design professors as well as my friends’ lives. Through all the research that I have read about or received over the weeks, I have formed questions to ask in my interviews. This will actually put my research question more in effect. The question is, “In what ways have dreams, inspirations, and goals influenced designers in the 20th and 21st centuries?” This leads me to ask these questions.

1. Have you ever been inspired by your dreams?

Amanda: “Ever since I was a little girl interior design, decorating, and fashion was a trend. This inspired me to be more artistic and creative with my designs.”

Mrs. Venetta: “I never was inspired by my dreams and felt as though my dreams had anything to do with my designs”.

2. Has there been anyone you’ve known or met that has been inspired by their dreams?

Amanda: “While viewing my thesis in college I found that there were many designers that were inspired by their dreams and as well been inspired by other designers like I did.”

Mrs. Venetta: “Throughout my career as a interior when I first started out there were a few people who had inspired me and my dreams to become a successful interior designer”.

3. When you hear the word dream what do you think of?

Amanda: “I think of inspiration, goals, and a chance to prove yourself and strive for what you want. The sky is the limit.”
Mrs. Venetta: “I think of inspirations and goals when the word dream comes to mind”.

Shay: “I think of sleep, somewhere pleasant, and nice”.

Debbie: “I think of my goals in the future and inspirations”.

Dave: “Among the thing you wish will come true, so fight hard to make it reality”.

4. How has time changed in the interior design field since you where younger?

Amanda: “Interiors were more associated with home economics back in the 70’s and the 80’s and earlier. Used to the women in the household decorating and choirs. Compared to the interior design field today it has expanded and changed a lot. There are television shows and more programs to get the word out and become more of a interesting major to take in college.”
Mrs. Venetta: “Time has changed a lot from my day and when I first started out in the interior design field. Everything was done in person not over the computer. Now everything is done through technology. Even the interviews with clients and designs too it’s rare you will ever need to draw out your designs”.
5. Describe your dream house?
Shay: “My dream house would be big and exotic just like celebrities”.

Dave: “My house would reflect me and it doesn’t necessarily have to be big average size is nice and comfortable.”

Debbie: “My house would comfortable and a descent size”.

Asking these questions made me become more interested in my topic and made me realize how much dreams have affected not just my life as an interior design major, but my fellow friends and professors. This also made my interviewees actually sit back and realize how much the word dream means how it has affected their career. Life has changed a lot over the years in the interior design field.
In my result section, I ended up using my female professor who is in her 20’s, another female professor who is in her 40’s, and one classmate who is in my interior design class, who is around the same age as me (in her early 20’s). I asked all of them the same research and some of the questions were different and the others were somewhat the same. The people that I chose didn’t affect my questions or what I was trying to do to get the response I wanted just because I don’t know them I just know of them beyond school.

After having these questions read and discussed with my recipients, I realized that a lot of of my research question had changed. After all my research on dreams while sleeping to know if interior designers ever dream of their creativity or their designs, the answer was no. This ended up turning my attention more on the dream aspect of the designer, to ask them what the word dream means to them and what their dream house would look like. I decided to ask a few of my friends what the word dream meant to them. The first person I interviewed was my friend Shay, .She explained that a dream meant “sleeping, pleasant, and serene” to her. For her dream house, what came to mind was a big exotic house that was like celebrity status. The reason for this is because for her fantasy dream house, it would be big and different than what she was used to. I asked another one of my girlfriends named Debbie the same questions and what the word dream means to her. She said she thought of the word “goal” and “sleeping” as well. When it came to her dream home, she thought of a comfortable house not so much big but average. This was different from Shay’s answer. Next I asked my friend Dave who is from Lyon, France what he thought about the questions and how he felt about coming to the U.S. His answer was that dreams lie “among things you wish on and can become reality”. He didn’t think so much of the American dream: “I thought more of becoming successful and wanting to visit the U.S. to see how it was like”. But he explained to me that this isn’t true for all foreigners. His dream house is a house that is comfortable and reflects who he is, that is elegant and average size, to keep the family bond together not far apart.
The overall discussion with my interviewees made me redirect my research question as well as have a different view point on my whole topic about dreams. After talking to my interviewees I found out that there weren’t many people who are inspired by their unconscious state of mind with their designs and during their life. When I had talked to my professors about their dreams and if they ever incorporated their dreams in their design, they had told me no. This was a shock to me because I felt as though I was the only one that has been inspired and has incorporated my dreams in my designs. Since they were interior design professors, I would think they would have related, but they didn’t. For my conclusion, I found out that I was receiving more responses about dreams being a goal, inspiration, and influence on their lives compared to sleep making an impact on their lives.

References
Freud, S. (1998). Interpretations of Dreams. Retrieved March 5, 2010, from http://www.wsu.edu:8080/~wldciv/world_civ_reader/world_civ_reader_2/freud
Hori, T, Ogwana, K, Abe, T, Nittono, H. (2008). Brain potentials related to rapid eye movements and dreaming during REM sleep: A short review of psycho physiological correlates. Sleep & Biological Rhythms, 6 (3), 128-138, 11, 4 diagrams, 4 graphs. Retrieved from EBSCO HOST
Kantrowitz, B, Springmen, K, Wingert, P, Ulick, J. (2004).What Dreams Are Made Of. Newseek. 44 (6), 40-47, 8. Retrieved from EBSCO HOST
Koch, A. (2009). Dreams: Bringing Us Two steps Closer to The Client’s Perspective, 8 (4), 333-348. Retrieved from EBSCO HOST

http://web.ebscohost.com/ehost/detail?vid=23&hid=12&sid=05984fc9-20fb-4090-aff0-167aa015867c%40sessionmgr10&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#db=a9h&AN=47029584db=a9h&AN=47029584

Lippman, P. (2006). The Canary in the mind: On the fate of dreams in psychoanalysis and in contemporary coulture. American Journal of Psychanalysis. 66 (2), 113-130, 18. Retrieved from EBSCO HOST
Potthoff, J. K. (2006). Interior Designer in Architectural Education. International Journal of Art and Design. 25 (2). 217-230, 14, 2charts, 2graphs. Retrieved from EBSCO HOST

Schaverien, J. (2005). Art, dreams and active imagination: A post – Junigan approach to transference and the image. 50 (2), 127-153, 27. Retrieved from EBSCO HOST http://web.ebscohost.com/ehost/detail?vid=7&hid=12&sid=05984fc9-20fb-4090-aff0-167aa015867c%40sessionmgr10&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#db=a9h&AN=16433614db=a9h&AN=16433614
Wallack, C. 2009. Dream Home: Remodeling American expectations with model houses. The journal of American Culture. 32 (4), 332-341.

Cover letter

Tempess Johns
2536 Rubicam Ave
Willow Grove, PA, 19090
267-475-4833
sbxp@iup.edu

Dear, Mindee Lieske/ Crimson Quill

My name is Tempess Johns. Right now I am currently attending Indiana University of Pennsylvania, Indiana PA. As a student studying in the Interior Design field. I’ve come to the university with big inspirations and desires to meet and join things over the years in college. Coming into research writing 202 class I didn’t know what to expect from the course or my professor Marlen Harrison. Entering the class for the first time he got straight to the point and told us that the work load was going to be heavy. It was my choice to stay in the class or withdraw so I decided to take the challenge.
Starting out the semester was a struggle because the professor did things differently. In the beginning the work load was heavy to cover all the work so by the time we had finals the work would be easier. I must admit the process was hard but I got it done.
The topic I chose to do more research on was about dreams and its association with interior designers. Me being an interior design major I often receive ideas from my dreams then incorporate them in my designs. My research was to find out if other designers could relate to me and what the word “Dream” meant to them. In the very beginning of the paper I struggled to put my entire thought on the paper and finding enough articles. By my methods and results section my paper started to come together and I felt a little better about my topic. After the first few peer reviews I felt even more comfortable about what I have written. The feedback was useful and I loved the criticism that I was receiving because it should me that the person took their time to read my paper. This helped me out in the long run by making my research paper sound better for the final draft.
Overall I think that I got my point across about what my topic was all about. To have my reader understand how designers and dreams relate to one another. I feel as though my hard work has paid off by the final draft. I did learn a lot in this class that will be helpful for my future career but most of all to not procrastinate. I truly appreciate this class and the professor who taught it.
Thank You for taking out the time to read my paper I hope you enjoy it. I hope to hear from you.

Sincerely, Tempess Johns

Blog #15 Peer Review

I enjoyed the peer review process it truly helped me out a lot when it comes to staying on track. My paper in the beginning was all over the place because I didn’t know how to put my thoughts on paper. There were four people that I revised for and every paper was an interesting one. This was the first time I had ever had to peer revise four paper within a weeks spand. At first I didn’t want to because of the work load I had. But afterwards I understood that that was really helpful for my fnal paper. I took other classmate work as a guide for my own. I After every paper I had revisied there was another error in my paper that I had to fix. But I like the critism and it helped me grow as i peer edited my own work as well as others. I enojed the feed back and I hope that the feedback I gave to other were helpful as well.

Portfolio

First Section

Second Section

Part 1<What is Research Writing? What does it mean to be a research writer? How are research questions developed?
Part 2:Genres of Research Writing
Part 3:Reading Critically & Evaluating Sources
Part 4:Understanding Formatting (MLA/APA/CMS)
Part 5:Creating a proposal and outline for a research paper
Part 6:Writing an Annotated Bibliography
Part 7:Understanding Audience
Part 8:Drafting and Revising; Introduction, methods, and discussions, results,& conclusion
Part 9 :P eer Review and Feedback
Part 10 :P ublishing Research

Third Section
-Proposal
-Outline

-First Draft
-Final Paper

Fourth Section
-Peer Review

Fifth Section
-Midterm & Reflective Letter
-Letter to Editor

Sixth Section
-Anno BIB
-Handout

Blog#14

In a research paper there are three sections that need to be done at the end that will make the paper complete. In a results section there is everything needed for the reader to understand some of the results you received. For an example a graph, survey, interview, or a diagram. So the reader can have a visual idea of what and how many people responded and how much of a positive or neagtive response they recieved. as well as pin pointing all the important results. Something to look out for when it comes to doing your result section to not over do your results just put enough infomation to cover everything you need.
After the results section you move on to the discussion which is the section in your paper that you take your results and take it into considerstion with investigation of all the infomation you ended with in the indroduction section. This time your testing out your hypothesis and overall the information your feeding the reader. Watch out for using to much of the first person and don’t keep restating yourself over and over again.
The conclusion section is the very end of the paper and can be the most difficult as well as the introductio section. This brings all the infomation all together from the body of the paper to thr end its bringing it all together.

http://www.ehow.com/how_5737710_write-results-section-research-paper.html

This document I found talks about the steps to follow to complete and have a successful results section in your paper.

http://www.experiment-resources.com/writing-a-discussion-section.html

This is a document talking about the discussion section of the paper.

http://www.ehow.com/how_2062895_write-conclusion-discussion-section-lab.html

The conclusion section is discussed in this document showing and telling you how to be a scholar at writing a conclusion.

Methods

Goal Statement- The purpose of this method section is for me to actually prove my research and all my work. By doing this I will be asking myself what, where, why, and how. To have me and the reader understand what type of methodology that I chose to do and why and where I received my information. I choose to interview my professors about their experience with their dreams and how it has inspired them. As well as using myself by turning it into an auto ethnography paper. My goal is to expand my research taking it away from the articles and books.

Methods- In my methodology section I’m going to explain in an auto ethnography genre how dreams inspired or been a goal in my interior design professors lives. Through all the research that I have read about or received over the weeks I have formed questions to ask my interviews. This will actually put my research question more in affect. The question is “In what ways have dreams, inspirations, and goals influenced designers in the 20th and 21st centuries.” So this leads me to ask these questions.

1. Have you ever been inspired by your dreams?

Amanda: “Ever since I was a little girl interior design, decorating, and fashion was a trend. This inspired me to be more artistic and creative with my designs.”

2. Has there been anyone you’ve known or met that has been inspired by their dreams?

Amanda: “While viewing my thesis in college I found that there were many designers that were inspired by their dreams and as well been inspired by other designers like I did.”

3. When you hear the word dream what do you think of?

Amanda: “I think of inspiration, goals, and a chance to prove your self and strive for what you want. The sky is the limit.”

4. How has time changed in the interior design field since you where younger?

Amanda: “Interiors were more associated with home economics back in the 70’s and the 80’s and earlier. Used to the women in the household decorating and choirs. Compared to the interior design field today it has expanded and changed a lot. There are television shows and more programs to get the word out and become more of a interesting major to take in college.”

Asking these questions made me become more interested in my topic a little more. And made me realize how much dreams have affected not just my life as a interior design major but my fellow friends and professors. This also made my interviews actually seat back and realize and see how much the word dream means had how it has affected their career. Life has changed a lot over the years in the interior designer.

Ending Statement- I accomplished my goals in this methodology by learning some things from outside of my normal boring researching ways by interviewing my professors. I learned from them that there were some similarities between to two but there was an age difference so it differed at the same time. This helped me as a researcher and an interior to understand and learn more about my professors and ask questions to get to know them better than I did before. This section of the paper seems to bring the paper to life more and I enjoyed doing that.

Blog #12

My research subjects will be myself and my professors also articles from the web. I will find them in their offices and I found the articles on EbscoHost, Journals, and Google scholar. All together I will need about 20 sources to cover my answers. Three professors some of my own opioions and articles. So far there are no dangers I haven’t ask their permention to us their names. I will make sure to ask them before I publish it. Th erest I will use citiations. Other than that there are no dangers and I will protect the persons name. The only question I have are the ones I will use in the interview with my professors. But overall I know my methodology is autoethnography and where my sources are coming from.

Blog #11

Other methods that I read from both was to analyze and collect generate the information within the articles. Also explains that the methodology should be clear enough to know what I want to do for my procedure of my paper. Another document that I found went into steps about how to do your research to be more organized and more about in detail if u need help.

http://www.rodp.org/courses/syllabi/engl1110.htm

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